What do you think of this?

It's a really good concept and creative, but there was a slight confusing part for me. Like, maybe you should tell more about what the "deer boy" legend is... and if he was a legend... why did he suddenly appear on a normal school day, i mean just out of no where, catch my drift? I mean, i get hes different,but i think everyone should be "scared" of a legend, not exactly teasing him. It's really good though, dont get my wrong. Continue writing, but remember to spend more time explaining this deer boy legend and why he suddenly decided to come to this school.